8 Outlining
What is outlining?
Outlining has the same purpose as a plan map: we use it to choose and organize ideas before we start writing our full essay. However, it is more formal and more detailed than a plan map. At the beginning of our course, I will require you to use both. But eventually, you will be able to choose whether you like plan maps or outlines better.
Let’s look at an example of how an outline relates to a brainstorming list and a plan map.
Brainstorming List:
Plan Map:
Outline:
I. Thesis Statement: The qualities of a good boss are being generous and responsible.
II. Topic Sentence 1: First, it is important for an employer to be generous.
A. Supporting Sentence 1: To start, providing good health insurance is a significant benefit to workers.
B. Supporting Sentence 2: Furthermore, bosses support employees when they offer bonuses.
III. Topic Sentence 2: Second, bosses must be responsible.
A. Supporting Sentence 1: To begin, it is necessary for a leader to be on time.
B. Supporting Sentence 2: Also, an effective employer is always honest.
Let’s look at this outline in more detail. As you can see, the outline has the same parts and ideas as the plan map. However, you can see that the topic sentences and supporting sentences are full sentences instead of one word or phrase. You can also include transition words in an outline (these are highlighted above).
Why don’t we include concluding sentences in our plan map or outline?
We don’t include concluding sentences in these because they are almost the same as the topic sentences. Our maps and outlines are only to show our basic organization.
Test your knowledge! Put each sentence or word in the correct place in the outline. The topic is: What are the qualities of a good teacher?
Let’s try again! This time the topic is: What are the benefits of going to college?